Narrative Assessment - Writing - 22 September 2016
Learner: Ekamjot Learning Coach: Megan Croll - LH2 Date: 22 September 2016 Learning Area: Writing Learning Observed Language features, e.g. similes, are used to give our writing impact. A simile is when a person or object is compared with another object by using the word ‘as’ or ‘like’. Ekamjot has been learning how to use a simile in her writing. The Black Gibbons worked together to brainstorm some similes, then I invited them to use similes to describe the colours of the rainbow. Ekamjot participated in the group brainstorm and discussion, then used some of the ideas from our brainstorm to create her own poetic piece about rainbows. After writing her draft, Ekamjot then proceeded to publish her writing and illustrate it; using the correct colours and sequencing as in a rainbow. Evidence of learning Key Competen...
